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Breath: Blood on the Snow

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It was Christmas....

I...hate...christmas...

Stupid colts would come to our front door and sing those "cute and beautiful" Christmas songs, trying to relax us...

Not to mention the snowballs...

And also, the fact that there's snow and it's hard to move...Christmas just has everything to be the worst holiday...

So...Everything started...In December 23rd...

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I was trotting around, with a red scarf and green ear muffs, I was heading torwards the café in Ponyville, Grayson's Snack Bar, get a cup of coffee, a group of four foals appeared on the way...

Two fillies and four colts, it were one of those Christmas Carols I hated so much...

When I went past them, things got worse, as they started following and asking...

"MISTER! MISTER! DO YOU WANT TO HEAR A CHRISTMAS SONG?!"

"No..."

"COME ON, JUST ONE!"

"No!"

"WE WORKED HARD FOR THIS!"

"NO!!"

They seemed pretty intimidated by my tone of voice...

I started making my way to the café once again, when I looked backwards, they were already trotting away...

Café

I was drinking a cup of coffee in the café, and suddenly...

A snowball hit me in the back of the head...

I looked backwards, angry, I saw a group of foals playing in the other side of the street...

"HEY, YOU!"

"SORRY, SIR!!"

I inhaled and exhaled, trying to keep calm...

"Control yourself, Sky...This is not the right day to go insane..."

I left the bits in the table and quickly started making my way back home, I didn't like to wander around Ponyville for too much at Christmas, due to the snow and obviously the damn foals...

I got there as fast as I could, I quickly took my scarf off and the ear muffs, and quickly head to my room...

Fluttershy was waiting for me in the bed, posing...

"Hi, Sky..." She purred "Are you feeling cold today? Maybe I can warm you up..."

"Maybe...But, I believe you can..."

I started trotting towards the bed, she sensually smirked at me...

I was about to finally get on the bed, my penis was already erected, until I heard the doorbell ring...

"Damnit..."

"Let it ring...It's probably one of these stupid Christmas Carols..." Flutters held my hoof...

"I pre-ordered a Funstation 4 yesterday, it might be it..."

"Okay...But please, be quick..."

I quickly trotted to the door...

It was a fucking Christmas Carol...

"OOOHHH MERRY CHRISTMAS TO-"

I closed the door on their faces...Soon it knocked again as I turned around...

I opened the door again, I still wonder why...

"HEY, RUDE!!"

"I don't care..."

I almost closed the door, if one of them didn't hold it...

I opened it again and an angry filly suddenly tackled me...

"LISTEN, WE WORKED HARD TO GET THIS SONG DONE, YOU ARE GOING TO HEAR IT ATLEAST ONCE!!"

"Get..." I grabbed her by the neck "Off..." I got up and held her in the air and threw her outside "ME!!"

And I closed the door...

I heard them ranting about me and leaving...

I went back to my room, and me and Flutters had our time...

But some time later, I wasn't able to sleep, I slowly pushed the snoring yellow pegasus off me and headed downstairs...

I was reading an old newspaper and suddenly, I read an article about a christmas psychopath that existed years before my arrival...

I had an idea...

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I started by looking around Ponyville for a Christmas Carol...

Eventually, I found one, it was the same one that knocked on my door a few hours ago...

They looked sad...

"Dagnabbit, nopony wanted to hear our song...So much work wasted..."

"I know, Blue Cake..."

They were sitting down in a small stairwell that led to a door...

I approached them...

"Hey, you four!"

They looked at me but pretended they didn't...

"Come on, I want to hear your song!"

They looked at me surprised and smiling...

"R-Really?"

"Yes! I got curious after all..."

I approached more, they all formed a line in front of me...

"OH MERRY CHRISTMAS TO YOOOOUU..."

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That...Was...The worst thing...I ever listened to in my entire life...

"So? Did you like it?"

"Y-Yes! Amazing! Good job! Now...If you want, I could bake you a cake for this amazing song!"

"REALLY?!"

"Yes, yes! Follow me!"

They didn't hesitate in following me, they kept singing the song on the way, unfortunately...

When we were nearly there, one of them suddenly slipped a hoof under my armpit...

"Hey, what's this?"

It was semen from my orgasm...

"Errh...Uhhh...It's milk! milk that I used for the cake! I accidentally let it fall on me while I was baking it!

I was a terrible liar, but he still believed me...

But he tasted the "milk"...

"Blargh, it tastes weird..."

When we got there, I let them in first...

"So?! WHERE'S THE CAKE?!"

"Calm down, I left in the kitchen, I'll take a piece from it for each for you! Wait here!"

"Fine!"

I ran to the kitchen, and I grabbed one of the cakes I was guarding for Christmas, and injected the sedative I use to knock out my victims in each piece of cake I cut...

And I gave it to them...

"Thanks, mister!"

"Don't mention it!"

I opened the door for them and they trotted out, eating the cake I gave to them, but I soon saw one of them getting dizzy and starting to have difficulty on keeping his balance...

He soon fell down along with the others....

Torture Room

Apparently, each of them had their names on their santa hats...

The first colt was "Silver Gunner", he had a gray coat and a purple mane, his cutie mark was a spear with a heart stabbed in it...
Silver Gunner

The second colt was a pegasus, "Steel Wings", he had a blue dark coat and a yellow mane, his cutie mark were, as his name said, steel wings...

The first filly was "Blue Cake", she was a cyan blue filly with a white and pink mane, her cutie mark, was a cake...
Blue Cake
The second filly was "Fluffy Power", a white filly wit
Steel Wings
h a red mane, her cutie mark was a pink rabbit...
Fluffy Power

Everypony was tied into a table, belly up, a tool desk near me was filled with instruments for cutting, crushing and etc...

Now, I just need them to wake up...

A Not-So Happy Christmas

I waited patiently for everypony to wake up...

"Huh? W-Where am I? D-Did I over ate cake again...?"

"M-Mom? Is it school time already?"

"Ungh...I love you Ophelia...Wait, where am I?"

I emerged from the shadows...

"Did your mothers never told you to not speak to strangers?"

"W-Who are you?"

"You scums know me...But just call me "The One That Will End Your Pathetic Lives"..."

"Uuuuhh...Y-You're kidding right? HAH, g-good one! Y-You got us well, mister!" Silver Gunner said...

I grabbed a hammer and a box of nails and went to him...

He let out a forced smile at me, I stared at him coldly, I placed the box of nails next to his leg and grabbed one...

I held in the thigh of his left leg...

"Heh...Heh, heh...Sir, this ain't funny anymore...Y-You're scaring me..."

I glanced at him coldly and bringed the hammer down hard...

The nail entered his leg as he screamed loudly, I could hear the others gasping, I kept hammering the nail done until it touched his bone...

I had to hammer it hard so it could go through it, eventually, the nail would break the sciatic nerve and he would lose control of his leg...

That's what happened...

"MY LEG!! I CAN'T FEEL MY LEG!!"

"Quit your whining, you're going to feel worse very soon..."

I went to his other leg with another three nails in my mouth...

I took a glimpse at the others, all of them were shocked and soon Cake would start to panic and shout...

"HEEEELP!! PLEASE SOMEPONY GET ME OUT OF HERE!! I DON'T WANT TO DIE!!"

I grabbed one nail from my mouth and hammered it down hard it in Silver's thigh, and did the same other other legs...

He was completely unable to move any of his legs...

He was crying...

"W-Why are you doing this...?"

"Boredom and also the fact you little peasants are annoying as hell..."

"We didn't do anything to you!"

"Nooooo, you just annoyed me the entire day by wanting me to hear that song of yours, and in the end with was absolute bird shit..."

"You didn't like it?"

I leaned closer to his face...

"What do you think?"

After that, I grabbed another nail from the nailbox and held it in his ballsack...

"NO! NONONONO!! ANYWHERE BUT THERE!! I BEG YOU!!"

"And I castrate you..."

I bringed the hammer down hard, the nail went through his ballsack...

He screamed like a filly...It was bloody hilarious...

I took another glimpse at the others...They were just plain shocked, staring at me, except Cake, who was still wasting her energy trying to get herself free...

I looked back at Silver's ballsack and grabbed it...And pulled it...

He screamed loudly, as the nail was ripping the sack apart, vertically, blood was coming out of it, soon the sack was entirely ripped, but still attached to his crotch, using my other hoof, I pulled it harder, and I fell backwards as it came out...

I quickly got up with the scrotum in my hooves, Silver was trying to hold his hooves in the open wound in his crotch, too bad he had lost control of them...

After that, I showed the scrotum to each of the foals there, Steel looked at it them looked away, Fluffy closed her eyes before I was even able to show it at her, and I ended up having to force Cake to look...

And then, I went back to Silver and held the dead scrotum on top of him, and I crushed it slowly with my own bare hooves...

Blood started puring out of it as I crushed it more and more, and started falling on Silver's chest, he then, vomited...

"WHAT THE FUCK?!" I shouted as vomit flew and hit me...

I angrily forced the scrotum inside his mouth, I could see that he was choking on his vomit after a few seconds, I thought about grabbing a scalpel from the desk but I had a better idea...

I leaned closer to his neck and bited it, shaking it hard, making it get ripped to shreads...

And soon I felt my teeth touching his jugular, I bited it and pulled my head away, it came out along with my mouth, I threw it in the air and then let it fall in my mouth and chewed it...

I looked back to Silver...he was dead...

I looked at the other foals, Steel just plain vomited all over himself, same went to Fluffy, who was crying and Cake...crying hard...

I went to Steel next...

"Damn, what a mess..."

There was vomit all over him, in his face, chest, belly, everywhere...

I didn't have a rag or anything to clean it next to me...

There was only one thing I could do...

Lick it all off...

I had to do it, it wasn't that horrible anyways, I was hungry after all...

So, I proceeded to lick all the vomit from him, from the hooves to up, it tasted bad but I also could taste some sugar in it, it was probably the cake I gave to him...

He shivered as I was licking his scrotum, but I kept going, until I got to his belly...

When I took a small glance at him, he was disgusted, his mouth was also covered in vomit...expect fucked up things very soon...

And I continued on until I got to his chest, with the corner of my eye, I saw the others watching in disgust as well, but things got worse when his body was clean, well, kinda...

I had my lips covered with vomit and blood, and I had to find a way to get those out of it, no?

Exactly, I "kissed" him...

He let out muffled screams I licked my own lips off and rubbed my tongue in his, however, it turns out I was enjoying that, and it was making me horny...

I hopped on the table, and leaned down to continue kissing him, and suddenly...

I thrusted hard...

He was powerful enough to push my muzzle away and scream loudly, as my erected cock entered his small hole...

And I kept going as he screamed more and more, the fillies to my left were all looking away...

And I climaxed...

I noticed something funny, his belly got bigger after it ended, well, not as big as a pregnant mare, but a few more inches bigger, it probably filled it with cum...

I jumped off and grabbed a scalpel from the tool desk and went back to him...

"Let's play doctor! I'm the doctor and you're the patient!"

I didn't even waited for an answer, I cut his belly vertically, he only moaned with what was left of his energy...

When the belly splitted in two sides, I was surprised to see I was right, I could see his stomach, it was gigantic and there was a white liquid in it...

It was cum...

I ripped the stomach off with my own bare hooves...

"Hey look! It's your baby! Here, have it!"

I threw the stomach in his face, it exploded upon having contact with it...

Acid cum was burning his face, I grabbed a needle and a thread from my tool table...

You probaly thought I was going to knot his belly, but NOPE, I noticed his anus was bleeding, and bleeding roughly, I had to knot it so it would stop, and that's what I did, each time the needle went through his skin, he moaned with what was left of his energy...

Suddenly, I noticed he had passed out in shock when I finished...

He would eventually bleed out and die...

I went to the next foal...Fluffy...

Her eyes stared at me wide, filled with tears, she was trembling and whimpering, I could see she was traumatized...

Which was great...

"P-Please...don't kill me...I beg you...I'll do anything you want..."

"...Anything?"

She nodded...

I went behind the table, next to her head, and then, I placed both of my hind legs on the table, keeping myself balanced with my two front legs on the ground, it looked like I was bucking a tree, but instead, I was just waiting for a blowjob...

I could feel my still erected cock touching her face, but judging by her age, I believe she still didn't know what to do...

"Suck it, immediately..."

I shook my flank, making the dick wobble around her face, soon...I felt a tongue touching it...

I wasn't up for waiting her to slowly get the hang of it, I quickly inserted the penis in her mouth and facefucked her until I orgasmed for the second time, sending chills down my spine...

I could hear the filly choking on all the cum, I glanced at the filly to our left, Blue Cake, she was tired and sweating, and looking away...

I removed my legs from the table and my penis from Fluffy's mouth and checked on her, she had passed out, but I still thought it wasn't gruesome enough...

I looked at the filly and thought of what I could do with her...I had an idea...

I grabbed the scalpel that I used to cut Steel open and went back to her, and cut her throat open...

Blood soon leaked out, along with some semen, both smells were mixed and had a strong aroma, I chuckled and went to Cake...

She was still looking away with her eyes closed, I had to force her to look at me, I grabbed her head and turned it to mine...

She still had her eyes closed...

"Open your eyes..."

She slowly opened them...

"I'm sorry...for irritating you...but please, let me go...I don't want to see more of this..."

"I can't let you leave, what happened here will haunt your nightmares, you will be traumatized, scarred for life, you will some day commit suicide, are you sure you just don't want to end it all?"

"I want to leave..."

"No...tell me what you REALLY want..."

"I...I...I..." she inhaled "I want to die..."

"Exactly..."

"But...I want to see my mother again, my father..."

"Impossible...I'm sorry, I will send your condolences to them...If you tell me where they live..."

"Third Avenue, House Number is Five-one-one..."

"Got it..."

A tear fell from her eye...

"...Kill me...but quick..."

"Sure...But, I think you should close your eyes..."

I grabbed a hacksaw...

And started sawing her chest open vertically, she screamed...

"AAAAARGH!! YOU SAID IT WOULD BE QUICK!!"

"I lieeeeeed!"

"BUCK YO-ARRRRRGH!"

I kept going until the skin was severed enough, after that, I split the chest's skin apart and saw the ribcage, I decided to make that more painful...

I grabbed a hammer from the tool table and slowly hammered each of her bones with the minimum strenght possible...

She moaned in each hit and also shivered...

Until I finnally hit the hammer with everything on the center of her ribcage, she screamed loudly, as many bone fragments penetrated her organs, including her heart...

Soon, she fainted, but she wasn't dead, I grabbed the hacksaw...

Merry Bloody Christmas!

I threw the present inside the box and went to Cake's parents house and left the present on the doorstep...

And ringed the bell...

I ran and watched everything from a dumpster on the other side of the street...

They opened the door and started reading the note I left on the present's box...

"From: An Anonymous Somepony

To: Cake Family

Please open the present as soon as you pick it up!"

They did it...

I laughed my flank off, as they screamed and dropped the box with Cake's severed head inside, not only that, but soon hooves and legs too...

And what about you, dear reader? What do you want for Christmas? Maybe I can give something for you...I'm sure you'll like it...

Trivia

  • Skyblack breaks the fourth wall in the ending yet again. A trick used by Mike in the Spinpasta version of the story was to use a USERNAME template, that made the username of the person reading the story appear instead of "dear reader".

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